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Well Damn...

February 16, 2015
By Ruin_1202 PLATINUM, Griffin, Georgia
Ruin_1202 PLATINUM, Griffin, Georgia
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I have some friends that I won't see.
And every time we try it's just not meant to be
I have some friends that I used to know
And now we know each other through the telephone
Well damn this truth I'd rather sit at home
Than to be surrounded by some shadows that make me feel alone.
I have a love that's run away
And if I ever find it I doubt it'll be the same
I have a love that can't be found
I've searched everywhere in this ghostly town
Well damn love too I'd rather find the sound
That's compelling me to leave my long lost love for now.
I have some precious memories
Of how this dreadful life used to be
I have some precious memories
Of ruling this world and you standing next to me
Well damn you too I mean Where are you now?
When I needed you the most you were not around.



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on Feb. 19 2015 at 3:31 pm
Ruin_1202 PLATINUM, Griffin, Georgia
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Yeah, I agree. My father always told me that people who used profanity fell short of finding the words to completely express themselves, so if I lost you in my expression forgive me, but I never write with the thought of making great poetry. I write in emotion and sometimes emotion is uncontrollable or overwhelming. If nothing else you can understand I was angry when writing this. Thank you for your feedback I really do appreciate it and maybe look at some of my other work which holds no profanity. This was only a first for me.

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on Feb. 18 2015 at 2:32 pm
RealRiter GOLD, Astoria, Oregon
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"I did not fail 101 times, but I simply found 101 ways that did not work." -Thomas Edison

That`s too bad. Woulda been a great poem if you hadn`t of cussed in it. Oh well, your loss.