Burgundy Wax

July 31, 2014
By Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
87 articles 0 photos 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers


Blood and tears on my invisible hands
A rampage on angels
But my head is too deep in the sands
to know I'm in the wrong

Reminiscence of a monster
Fallen upon deaf ears
Just me and my fresher blood
Just me in my fresher years
All that I need is one more lonely sinner
to continue the candle with their burgundy wax


Realize
Realize I am cutting oxygen
Won't you come over and liven up my cuff
While the chains are so weak, I doubt that I'm enough
Oh, my
Oh, my
Imprisoned by myself
Condemned to die

Reminiscence of a monster
Fallen upon deaf ears
Just me and my fresher blood
Just me in my fresher years
All that I need is one more lonely sinner
to continue the candle with their burgundy wax

Reminiscence of a monster
Fallen upon deaf ears
Just me and my fresher blood
Just me in my fresher years
All that I need is one more lonely sinner
to continue the candle with their burgundy wax



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on Nov. 23 2014 at 2:07 pm
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
87 articles 0 photos 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

Uh....yeah. Not to be rude, but it's called a chorus...

on Nov. 23 2014 at 12:45 am
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack
Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn
You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

This is amazing! I love how you used the same phrase in multiple stanzas. Great job!!

AbbeyW SILVER said...
on Oct. 2 2014 at 10:58 pm
AbbeyW SILVER, Browns Summit, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"As a writer you have to ask yourself to dream while awake." -Aimee Bender

The idea of burgundy wax is brillant! I'm a little confused how the speaker says he/she doesn't know what he/she is doing wrong yet feels the condemnation of sin. I could use a little help on my poems if you wouldn't mind checking them out  TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/678285/Under/

on Aug. 8 2014 at 3:48 pm
theallidiaries, Henerson, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"imagination is the only weapon in the war against reality." -cheshire cat

i love that. thats amazing


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