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Hello, hello.

August 12, 2013
By Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
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Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers


Hello, hello. This is a recording of the first day.
Innocence of the sweet, unknowing child.
Hello, hello. This is a recording of the last day.
Hurt, alone, and defiled.
The snowflakes leave their teardrops on cold, cold tombstone.
Hello, hello, lie with them in the enlightened unknown.

Hello, hello. This is a recording of the shadows.
Hello, hello. If you're hearing this, the angels have fallen.
I'm so sorry that coffins contain the key.
The key to the treasure of which you dream, dream, dream.
Doors leading to dead ends.
Doors leading to nothing.
Corridors with ghostly turns and bends.
You get lost in the maze of mourning, just looking for something.

Hello, hello. This is a recording of the first day.
Hello, hello. This is recording of the last.
Hello, hello. Lift me out of this insanity.
Hello, hello. Can anybody hear me?
Goodbye, goodbye. this is a recording of the last day.
Goodbye, goodbye. Goodbye, goodbye.


The author's comments:
Don't read if you don't like the word "Hello." :p

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. said...
on Sep. 19 2013 at 1:38 am
i just like repetitive writing i did that in one of my poems and its one of my favorite....go being repetitive!  

Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 9 2013 at 10:11 pm
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened.
- Thomas Jefferson

Things like this make me wish i could sing.reminds me of doctor who in a way.

on Aug. 28 2013 at 12:59 am
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
87 articles 0 photos 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

You LIKE the repetition? Huh. xD Thank you for the feedback! :D

on Aug. 27 2013 at 12:57 am
maelstrom14 GOLD, Oak Habor, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
let me not to the marriage of true minds admit impediments...etc

Really good shade I like the repetitiveness : D