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Was She Worth It?

October 27, 2012
By FaithSnyder16 ELITE, Metamora, Ohio
FaithSnyder16 ELITE, Metamora, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Write what you know, and dream of. - Jane Austen
People throw rocks at things that shine - Taylor Swift
Just Keep Swimming! Just Keep Swimming! - Ellen DeGengeres as Dory

Acid rain,
couldn't wash away this pain,
I've been blinded,
I've been blinded.

When you walked out the door,
I still crying your name,
knees on the floor,
head hung in shame...

I miss you,
it's like my heart can't beat,
and there's nothing I can do,
but chase you down the street.

And I know you hurt me,
but it feels all the same,
I never thought this would be,
a heart break game.

I stare at the window,
waiting for you again,
even thought I know,
you don't feel my pain.

Was she worth it?
Worth our collected years,
didn't we fit?
Or did you get tired of my tears?

Cause I would change my ways,
become someone new,
would change my days,
if I could only have you.

Was she worth it?
Was she worth it?

The author's comments:
I don't know what this is about. I've never been cheated on... but for some reason I just had this strong emotion in me to write this.... I think it's one of my past life poems. If you've read some of my other stuff that's the term I use when I have a poem that's never happened to me before but it's felt so real that it feels like it has, so it has to have been in my past lives! lmfao I know but, it's my only explanation! :)

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. said...
on Nov. 3 2012 at 7:17 pm
Thanks so much! I'm so very happy that you've commented you've made my day!!!! XD

on Nov. 3 2012 at 4:41 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

That was beautiful! I love how you write. I'll be reading more of your pieces! Keep writing, and good luck on your future writing endeavors!

. said...
on Nov. 2 2012 at 6:33 pm
Thanks so much for reading and commenting! :D Im glad you thought so! :D

on Nov. 2 2012 at 11:42 am
mynameismittens, Noblesville, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"You have to believe in yourself when no one else does--that makes you a winner right there." -- Venus Williams

This is beautiful. I love the first verse.