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Why Can't I See You Darling?

June 9, 2012
By lipglosser PLATINUM, Merrimack, New Hampshire
lipglosser PLATINUM, Merrimack, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding." -Khalil Gibran


I can feel you right next to me
Your fingers through my hair
Your breath combined with mine
Your warm touch lights up my heart
So why can't I see you darling?
Have I gone blind?
Has my heart closed up?
Or have I gone outta my mind?
Oh baby darling I'd give anything
Just to see you
I keep asking when it will be?
Seeing yourself right next to me
I close my eyes
In hopes of a pleasant surprise
And I can feel you next to me
Your fingers through my hair
Your breath combined with mine
Your warm touch lighting up my soul
So why can't I see you my darling
Oh why can't I see you?
I'd give anything to see your smile
That would keep me going for awhile
I know your here
So why can't I see you?
Sometimes I picture you and me
And how I wish we'd be


The author's comments:
This is based on a guy that I like that I wanted to meet so badly. I never got to see him in person, so this is dedicated to the guy..

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Manish9 SILVER said...
on Jun. 21 2012 at 9:19 pm
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
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nyc poem and very well versed .. keep em comin ! =)

on Jun. 17 2012 at 8:01 pm
lipglosser PLATINUM, Merrimack, New Hampshire
22 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding." -Khalil Gibran

Omg thank you! I shall :)

on Jun. 17 2012 at 4:59 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

Well Written! Keep writting! This would help make a great song. (: