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Wounded Love

May 6, 2012
By Wilson1994 GOLD, Holywood, Other
Wilson1994 GOLD, Holywood, Other
10 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Nothing lasts forever. Forever's a lie. All we have is what's between hello and goodbye.' Unknown


There was no time for me
Out of my mind I feel
Holding you closer to my chest
Oh
I love you
I love you
Screaming out the words
Three little words
And now I am falling, falling down.
Oh and I felt my chest, beat out my heart from rest
Don't let me go
Don't let me go
I'm falling faster now,
oh and time goes by
holding my arms so tight
Won't you stay here
Won't you stay here
Please stay for me
Now my heart doth stop by it's on
recognise my face when i say I'm out of disgrace
I know now why you wont hold me tight
It's a bond that I feel no right
to hold my dear loves fight.
Fall
Fall
Fall
Fall
down
down
you go on and on and on but never to hold me tight at all at all
no more strife you go and I'm alright
all on my own, singing alone to the walls.


The author's comments:
Simplistic, this song would last three minutes at a pace of three beats to a bar. Nearly walts like to balance the theme of love I have tried to portray, would be a slight blues/jazz song, hope people will get it!

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M_IML DIAMOND said...
on May. 28 2012 at 2:19 am
M_IML DIAMOND, Ganei Tikva, Other
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Awesome! Do you know how to write chords or notes or tabs or something?

on May. 22 2012 at 2:13 pm
Wilson1994 GOLD, Holywood, Other
10 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Nothing lasts forever. Forever's a lie. All we have is what's between hello and goodbye.' Unknown

yes! I usually start singing and then a song is born, which is what happened here! I'd love to put the music for it up but I don't think I can

M_IML DIAMOND said...
on May. 22 2012 at 3:49 am
M_IML DIAMOND, Ganei Tikva, Other
78 articles 0 photos 61 comments
Wow, this is really beautiful...have you written the music yet?


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