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Deep Down Inside

March 3, 2010
By jbutterfly10 GOLD, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
jbutterfly10 GOLD, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
There is a time for everything under the sun:~

Sometimes I sit and wonder
How did we get here?
People come and go,
But you leaving is what I fear
The most.

What happened to us?
Why can’t we make it? Make it
We’re losing all that we have.
Can our friendship take it? Take it.

Things aren’t as they seem.
Something is so wrong.
Look deep down inside.
All the things you said,
And all the things you did.
I just wanna forget….

The pictures are all burned.
And it’s all cause I’m not her.
That wall you’ve built will soon collapse
And when it does, nothing’s gonna last.
You’ll lose it all.
All you thought you wanted.
It’ll all be gone.
And when the rain comes,
I’ll be there beside you
To guide
And remind you!!


It’s been awhile.
Since you’ve been here.
You rang that doorbell and you waited.
I didn’t expect to see you crying.
But your eyes were filled with tears.
And that’s when I knew.
She had you made on cunning little lie.
I also knew that you looked deep down inside.

I don't wanna hurt anymore.
I don't fight.
I don't want the slamming of the doors.
I just wanna talk all through the night.

Things now are the way they seem.
You looked down, down deep inside:~

The author's comments:
This is a song about friendship. Even though you and your best friend fight and don't get along, would you seriously want to lose them?!

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kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Jun. 24 2010 at 6:28 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

This is really good! I love the way it is written and hope you continue to write :) You replied to a comment of mine and just wanted to let you know that Kenna is just a nickname;my real name is McKenna :) I hope you will take the time to check out some of my stuff.

Milo! said...
on Apr. 3 2010 at 3:34 pm
What a great piece. It’s so understandable. You made it really easy to see where you’re coming from. I hope you keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.