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Hidden Love

October 19, 2009
By PeaceLoveDance321 GOLD, Chadds Ford, Pennsylvania
PeaceLoveDance321 GOLD, Chadds Ford, Pennsylvania
15 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Rose petals everywhere,
A single flower
He placed in her hair,
It was he,
The love of her life,
Who she wanted to be with all the time,
Day light,
Or dark night,
She knew he was the one,
Loved him more than life itself,
His bright, blue eyes and perfect, pearly smile
Made her want to melt,
He wasn’t perfect but he was close,
Yet she couldn’t tell him how she felt,

As he placed a flower in her hair,
He looked in her eyes,
And knew that love was there,
He watched her flash a flirty smile, and blush at his kind gesture,
He knew she was the one,
For it wasn’t her looks that he treasured,
It was her heart,
That he would always remember.

They looked at each other with such passion,
They admitted their hidden love,
Relived they both fell the same.
Impossible to separate,
Each others soul mate,

Next thing you know,
Rose petals, are spread once again,
This time along a silk white isle,
She walked to her love,
Once again she flashed a flirty smile,
He thought to himself “I'm the luckiest man,”
They, said I dos,
And exchanged rings hand to hand,
Heart to heart,
Lip to lip.
Before they knew it they became parents,
Prayed for a chance for him to find love like theirs,
To think it all started with a flower in her hair.

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This article has 16 comments.

Nessa13 GOLD said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 3:11 pm
Nessa13 GOLD, Charlestown, Indiana
18 articles 0 photos 109 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love, but never fall in love, because things that fall get broken"
-Taylor Swift

You are an amazing song writer!! Please tell me you can sing!! lol That would b an amazing song! If you can't sing, then find someone that can!!! I would love to hear that song on the radio!!

njlejla said...
on Sep. 17 2010 at 3:32 pm
This was amazing and it was really about love at first sight

on Jun. 21 2010 at 2:06 am
JamieStarr GOLD, Sevierville, Tennessee
11 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
o! thats why i love you. :) i love you.

this was very sweet i loved i hope you are a good singer because this song would be a number one hit :)

lexi said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 8:19 pm
oh my gosh i am breathless seriously!!! so hope that you become a singer one day cuz you wright awsome songs!!!!!!!!

on Mar. 2 2010 at 6:23 pm
poetic_natural GOLD, Jefferson, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you know you're in love because you can't fall asleep, because reality is finally better than your dreams"

this is so beautiful ....I love it ....its so full of smitten and sweet:)

BMMSVJ said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 9:24 am

megarie BRONZE said...
on Feb. 8 2010 at 8:25 am
megarie BRONZE, -, Michigan
1 article 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is do or do not. there is no "try".

wow. that is so beatiful.

on Feb. 8 2010 at 7:17 am
invisible13 GOLD, Gobles, Michigan
14 articles 0 photos 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
there is nothing so common as the wish to be remarkable

wow that was amazing i really loved it.

on Jan. 16 2010 at 1:16 pm
OMG this is exactly how i feel about my like best friend!!! i just hope our lives turn out the way your poem did!

Lonleydandy said...
on Jan. 16 2010 at 7:58 am
This is really sweet! I love it!!!!

on Dec. 26 2009 at 12:42 am
PeaceLoveDance321 GOLD, Chadds Ford, Pennsylvania
15 articles 0 photos 6 comments
Thank you I really appreciate it. I would e more than happy to check out your article.

on Dec. 25 2009 at 8:54 pm
Drama_Queen13 DIAMOND, Nantucket, Massachusetts
51 articles 0 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live Life Like A Song."

Wow! That was absoulutly beautiful! I loved every minute of it! Can you please read my story? The first chapter is Our Summer-Chapter 1-Summer Wish. Its about a summer romance between two teenage kids that ends in tradgey

on Dec. 2 2009 at 6:47 pm
PeaceLoveDance321 GOLD, Chadds Ford, Pennsylvania
15 articles 0 photos 6 comments
thank you so much, I will definatly check yours out, thats so great. Thank you, maybe another time I'll get a higher ranking.

on Dec. 2 2009 at 5:03 pm
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

Ahh, yes. I loved this song. You should check out mine as well. It's the top under recently submitted today and tomorrow it will be #1 under Top Voted. Congrats at recieving 4th, I believe you should be second at least.

on Oct. 27 2009 at 4:00 pm
PeaceLoveDance321 GOLD, Chadds Ford, Pennsylvania
15 articles 0 photos 6 comments

i will do that.

on Oct. 27 2009 at 3:58 pm
BeckoningLovely GOLD, Wilmington, Delaware
15 articles 1 photo 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I think our favorite quotes say more about us than the people we are quoting," John Green

Beautiful!!! Very deep and gentle!

PS: Read the rest of my stories!