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The Golden Sky

January 10, 2020
By FHeider BRONZE, Perrysburg, Ohio
FHeider BRONZE, Perrysburg, Ohio
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I miss you

 

and I wish you

 

were here by me

 

but now you’re free.

 

In great fields of green

 

where no one is mean.

 

Forever and ever

 

our hearts together

 

fly high

 

in The Golden Sky


The author's comments:

This poem is deticated to my best friend ever to exsist and may he RIP


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Chantal2021 said...
on Oct. 21 2020 at 7:42 pm
Chantal2021, Ewing, New Jersey
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I like the shortness of the poem. We are faced with the emotion of grief when we read about a close friend or relative finally being set free and having a better life somewhere up in the Golden sky.

on Sep. 4 2020 at 2:52 pm
shhhhhhiiiiiittttttffffuuuccckkk, Fuck, New York
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learn how to use metre before you try to rhyme..

on Aug. 12 2020 at 12:45 pm
BrokenBranches, Mansfield, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Do not tell me sky is the limit when there is a footprint on the moon." -Paul Brandt

Thanks for writing this, I lost my big brother and this spoke to me.

on Apr. 1 2020 at 7:48 pm
Enigmatic_Abstract, Garland, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Tell me, my dear, can a heart still break once it's stopped beating?

I understand how it feels to lose someone so close and I know how it feels to grieve over your best friend too I recently posted a poem called "The Life Hidden in His Death" that is about my best friend who also passed and I think you might like it