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Proceed with Caution

June 20, 2013
By mmmbri GOLD, Dubois, Pennsylvania
mmmbri GOLD, Dubois, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"each day's a gift, and not a given right."

I tried to make eye contact,
but looked away.
I attempted to hide the smile,
on my face.
My palms start to sweat,
and my hands start to shake.
These feelings are real,
not untrue or fake.
We fit together,
we're a perfect match.
Even if you were falling,
I promise I'd catch.
I'm glad we're together,
you and me.
It just makes sense,
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on Jun. 27 2013 at 6:15 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

this is cute! i like it a lot (: you never faltered from the ryhming pattern so that's awesome! it flowed really nicely and painted such a good picture in your mind! way to connect with the audience (: 5 stars! would you mind reading and commenting on my new piece "screaming, hitting, moving on?" it would be very helpful! again great piece! (: