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A Flaw of Love
October 15, 2012
Please stop me from crying,
Help me win this fight
Whisper to the wind,the water,
The cherry blossoms of the night
Help my smile awake,
With a joy unsurpassed
Even if such gentle things,
Were never meant to last
I remember all the feelings,
You gave me
And when i think of you,
My soul flies free
Even while my heart,
Aches deeply
Memories of you let me,
Treat others sweetly <3
© Louisa L., Pleasanton, CA
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This article has 13 comments.
Jordan-Tyler GOLD said...
on Nov. 1 2012 at 2:37 pm
yup
Babe_Angel said...
on Oct. 29 2012 at 8:12 pm
oh...that's sweet...!! how nice, you and her goes to the same school?
Jordan-Tyler GOLD said...
on Oct. 29 2012 at 9:11 am
dont worry he knows now, and he thought it was cute. lol. she told me today.
Babe_Angel said...
on Oct. 28 2012 at 11:52 pm
You should tell him, let he know what's on your mind. Who knows, maybe he's thinking the same too. How do you met him? Are you guy in the same school?
Jordan-Tyler GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2012 at 5:24 pm
lol. really tracy lol
Babe_Angel said...
on Oct. 26 2012 at 12:05 am
so jealous, I wish I can write poem like you. He must be very lucky
Babe_Angel said...
on Oct. 24 2012 at 11:59 pm
This is a pretty nice poem. I was wondering who is the lucky guy?
Jordan-Tyler GOLD said...
on Oct. 24 2012 at 8:50 pm
you are an amazing writer tracy. see you at school tommorow lol.
oh and a footnote:
Its embarassing to admit but he has the key to my heart and he was my first crush (>///<)