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Creeping Spiders

April 22, 2011
By Savanne BRONZE, Colfax, California
Savanne BRONZE, Colfax, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I was never going to amount to much anyway, but now, statistically speaking, there's a better chance that some part of me will go on to greatness somewhere in the world. I'd rather be partly great than entirely useless." ♥ -Unwind

Loneliness creeps over me
Like a spider in my bed
It whispers in my ears
It's playing with my head.

Nowhere now is safe to me,
I'm looking all around.
I want to fall into the sea
Escape this dreadful sound.

Spiders linger on my skin
They whisper 'it's alright'
I wish I knew how long its been
Since I have seen the light.

The author's comments:
I really like this poem and I hope you do as well. :)

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This article has 3 comments.

nope said...
on Sep. 5 2011 at 11:06 pm
This is really good, like I could feel the eeriness of it, it was great.

maddiii said...
on May. 25 2011 at 3:21 pm
I loveeeed it it was amazing!!!

on May. 25 2011 at 11:24 am
Sammie_Shamrock PLATINUM, Holland, Michigan
29 articles 5 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Just bury me in the memories" -Modern day escape


I can feel the emotion and its amazing your an author i mean