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Love as usual

April 20, 2010
By SavvyLane PLATINUM, Peoria, Illinois
SavvyLane PLATINUM, Peoria, Illinois
40 articles 4 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If youre a bird, Im a bird."


Love as usual
I sit in class and I miss you…
I know my love for you is true.
Filled with sadness, because your face I wish to see,
The pain shows on my face and someone asks what is wrong with me.
I tell them that its nothing…
But the truth it is not,
For I miss you a lot.
I sit in class and I think,
The look of sadness returns to my face because I wish to see you.
Someone asks what I am thinking and I say nothing…
But that isn’t the truth,
I am thinking that I miss you.
I sit in class and write a poem,
One that will say what I can not,
One that will say what I feel…
Someone asks what its about,
And my reply?
Love as usual.


The author's comments:
I have been writing poems frequently since I've gotten closer to Eli and I show the poems to my english teacher and she asked what they were about, I replied love as usual.

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on May. 14 2010 at 3:56 pm
SavvyLane PLATINUM, Peoria, Illinois
40 articles 4 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If youre a bird, Im a bird."

ty to u all for your comments:) Yep.

Ramzan SILVER said...
on May. 11 2010 at 7:47 pm
Ramzan SILVER, Loveland, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 29 comments
A nice poem, but in some places it just didn't flow well.

on May. 10 2010 at 7:18 pm
brokenheartedgurl BRONZE, Dos Palos, California
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
liv life 2 the fullest cuz u will neva know wat day will b ur last ;)<3

omg...i lived this poem...i luv the pic 2... luv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 10 2010 at 3:34 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
5 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

I like this but i also think that you could've done a bit more to it to make it more meaninful :) But keep writing, i really enjoyed reading this and related perfectly <3