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I Loved You. </3

April 8, 2010
By KellyJeanH PLATINUM, North Canton, Ohio
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Silence,
That's all I hear.
The voices,
Are what I fear.

Beaten, hurt,
And broken too.
They knew my feelings,
They knew I loved you.

They stole you,
And toke you away.
You knew with all their power,
You simply couldn't stay.

Slowly, now,
The pills go down deep.
Into your stomache,
As you weep.

The love I feel,
Grows so strong.
And when you leave,
I know I've been wronged.

My hair grows dark,
My face goes pale.
My skin is breaking,
by a thousand nails.

And as I lay,
Bleeding to death.
I whisper your name,
With my last breath.

© Amanda J., No. Miami, FL

The author's comments:
This is a poem I wrote after I learned about the suicide of my deceased boyfriend. This poem says everything I felt after I heard the news. It says everything I couldn't say when I was talking about it. No matter how many people hate this poem, I still love it. Because it is a part of me and it explains the feelings that, no matter how hard I try, I cannot put into words. So, I hope you like it. Thank you. =]
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