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October 8, 2016
By addictwithapen PLATINUM, Norfolk, Virginia
addictwithapen PLATINUM, Norfolk, Virginia
21 articles 14 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm at it again as an addict with a pen." - twenty one pilots, addict with a pen


Firm. Solid. Final.

Infinity made finite

by the smallest speck.


The author's comments:

Punctuation Haiku No.3 of ?


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on Apr. 9 2017 at 8:13 pm
addictwithapen PLATINUM, Norfolk, Virginia
21 articles 14 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm at it again as an addict with a pen." - twenty one pilots, addict with a pen

Thanks! I love punctuation a lot, so it was fun to write these haikus. :)

hwoodruff98 said...
on Apr. 9 2017 at 2:22 pm
hwoodruff98, Lititz, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"In a gentle way, you can shake the world." -Mahatma Gandhi

"What will your verse be?" -Dead Poets Society

"Write drunk, edit sober." -Ernest Hemingway

I love, love, love how you have taken punctuation marks and made haikus out of them. I also like how you have punctuated these haikus with the punctuation marks to which they are dedicated. The sounds the words produce when spoken aloud also have a musical quality. There's not much I can comment on for improvement; well done.