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A Brief Description of Air (A Collection of Haikus)

April 19, 2015
By AGarsson PLATINUM, Mill Valley, California
AGarsson PLATINUM, Mill Valley, California
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The air is naive
Sweet clouds go across the sky
Storms upon the towns

 

 

The air is memory
Smells of the summer flowers
Remembered in sky

 

 

Invisible air
Cannot see the hidden smoke
Purity is rare


The author's comments:

I have really challenged myself this semester to try new styles of poetry. I tend to write long, descriptive, free verse poems that tell stories. I wrote another poem on this site called "Distortion" which was all about repetition, which was hard for me since I personally dislike using the same words over and over with little space between. However, in the end I actually enjoyed what was on the paper and I even read it in front of my English class. This time I attempted writing haikus, where brevity is necessary. 


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