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Ode to Showerhead

January 6, 2015
By Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
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Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"


Inspiration rains

Down from your holey womb like

Snow from Decembers.



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on Mar. 1 2015 at 5:41 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

Oh, shower ideas... It's amazing to me that nobody has ever written this poem before, but then again, you consistently come up with fresh, creative ideas. Kudos to you, sir.

on Feb. 24 2015 at 7:10 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"

@Beila I'm really glad you clicked this title too. Thank you very, very much :)

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on Feb. 19 2015 at 11:55 pm
Beila BRONZE, Palo Alto, California
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Favorite Quote:
"The coldest winter I ever spent was a summer in San Francisco." -Mark Twain

Sometimes, it's the quirky pieces I wasn't sure I would get at first that I eventually realize I will remember for a long time to come. I'm so glad I clicked this title. :)

on Jan. 26 2015 at 8:01 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"

You really know how to make people feel good :) Thank you very, very much. The holy part was subconsciously inspired by Fred (George?) Weasley, as I realise now. And I do take cold showers in summer :D It was supposed to represent the 'plentiness' of inspiration. I'm not sure if snowfall is the right choice though, I've never experienced it. Yet. Thank you so much again, TaylorWintry, it really means a lot.

on Jan. 25 2015 at 10:46 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

Yes!! Get it! I cannot express how much I literally LOVE when people write about random, so-called pointless, everyday items. It makes me so happy to see what other people think of random items, such as the shower head. What you've stated here is probably one of the most true things I've ever read. I mean, everyone gets inspired in the shower. And, the way you wrote "Holey" instead of "holy?" You are a literal genius! XD I'm totally fangirling here, but this is really great. The only thing I would say to that last line is, "Do you take cold showers, too?" xD Okay. Thanks for writing this.