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Looking into the Void

December 29, 2014
By Richcoca PLATINUM, Canoga Park, California
Richcoca PLATINUM, Canoga Park, California
44 articles 5 photos 71 comments

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Make as many as mistakes as you want, just don't make the same mistake.


"What is life," we yell

as we look into the void

"What's life," an echo


The author's comments:

This is more of a read for someone to think about in isolation. I'd like to ask you to note the difference between, "What is life?!" and, "What's life?" There is a fine border between these spiritual question and this is a recondite poem so I don't believe many will grasp the true meaning hidden behind this poem.


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on Jan. 5 2015 at 5:57 pm
Richcoca PLATINUM, Canoga Park, California
44 articles 5 photos 71 comments

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Make as many as mistakes as you want, just don't make the same mistake.

By the way, if you want the explanation of this haiku, you can always just post a comment.

on Jan. 5 2015 at 5:56 pm
Richcoca PLATINUM, Canoga Park, California
44 articles 5 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Make as many as mistakes as you want, just don't make the same mistake.

Just want to thank everyone who shared and/or rated this.