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Moon's Face

November 17, 2013
By Netnel GOLD, Fair Lawn, New Jersey
Netnel GOLD, Fair Lawn, New Jersey
17 articles 1 photo 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything that is done in the world is done by hope.

The moon's face peaks out,
Yet it's shyness keeps it from
Showing its whole self.

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This article has 4 comments.

on Dec. 8 2013 at 2:56 am
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
23 articles 3 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:

Very nice! If I was going to give chritical feedback I may ask you where the moon was peeking out from, but very sweet!

Blynn SILVER said...
on Dec. 7 2013 at 10:48 pm
Blynn SILVER, Waco, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 97 comments
This is cute, good first haiku. 

Dals said...
on Nov. 29 2013 at 2:28 pm
Nice! Great interpretation!

dinks PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 20 2013 at 9:38 pm
dinks PLATINUM, Hinsdale, Illinois
28 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"and kisses are a better faith than freedom"

Love this, keep it up!