The Color of You This work is considered exceptional by our editorial staff.

You are the color
of sweet sunshine, my darling,
as the morning dawns.





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PixiePoet This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 16, 2013 at 12:05 pm
I AM SO MAD MY ACCOUNT ACTED UP.  I had it set so that Teen Ink would email me whenever you posted something . . . but it didn't work.  Oh, well. This is so sweet!  I love it!  Quite relatable, too.  A very nice haiku.
 
WatercolorWriter replied...
Nov. 16, 2013 at 8:03 pm
I said it was okay! No need to get so upset, don't worry. And thanks! I'm glad to see that people like it :)
 
Mckay This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 3, 2013 at 5:05 pm
This poem is the perfect way of telling that special person "I love you!" 5/5
 
WatercolorWriter replied...
Nov. 16, 2013 at 7:58 pm
That's so sweet of you! Thank you very much :)
 
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