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March 23, 2013
sleep passes over
like a restless gust of wind
so I hold my breath

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Behind_a_Plastic_Smile said...
May 4, 2013 at 9:52 pm
so i said this to myself a few times and i really like its simple yet thought provoking and even with so few words was able to create images in my head
OldYoungOne said...
Apr. 9, 2013 at 3:00 pm
I used to say that sleep was for the weak lol I think thats what your trying to say or at least you dont want to go to sleep. correct if im am wrong in that assumption but I love it none the less.
StarlitSunrise This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 9, 2013 at 8:44 pm
Haha you would be correct in that. :) I often stay up late writing, but it can be difficult not to doze off. :P And I'm so glad you like it. ^.^
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