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Repent Now

February 22, 2013
By ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.


I can see every
sin done through your eye’s swollen
blood vessels – piercing.

"Clear eyes" will not wash
away all of the vengeful
spirits, now will it?



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Mckay ELITE said...
on Aug. 1 2013 at 5:59 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2260 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

No porb. But you're definitely better. Your passion for them and the dedication demonstrates in all of them. Keep at it! 

on Jul. 31 2013 at 2:20 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.

Thank you for commenting on all of my haikus! I work really hard at them, and I can see that you are really good at haikus also.

Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 30 2013 at 3:39 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2260 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

Captivating and thought-porvoling. I enjoyed how you ended this poem with a rhetorical question. By the way, congrats with all of the Editors' Choices! 


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