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Buried MAG

February 10, 2013
By ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.


Precipice of my
mouth, gasping for oxygen,
soil in return.



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on Mar. 22 2014 at 11:10 am
KarmaBites GOLD, Columbia Heights, Minnesota
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Thank you for being such a good friend, hehe. I had to change all of my info. I can explain in the forums: TeenInk.com/forums?act=post&topic_id=16&thread_id=78975

on Mar. 20 2014 at 7:13 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.

From a gifted writer such as yourself, these words truly make my day brighter. Thank you for being a good friend :)

on Mar. 20 2014 at 9:59 am
KarmaBites GOLD, Columbia Heights, Minnesota
11 articles 0 photos 135 comments
Superb word choice! Congrats on getting published, Chris! You are one of the most talented writers on Teen Ink. Never stop writing!

Mckay ELITE said...
on Aug. 1 2013 at 5:07 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

Your dedication shows. And that is a very scary fear. Just imagining it makes me shudder. 

on Jul. 31 2013 at 2:32 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.

Being buried alive is really my biggest fear, and that was the inspiration behind this piece. This poem, for me, took alot of thought and concentration to write, thank you very very much for the kind words.

Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 30 2013 at 3:46 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2260 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

Frightening to imagine. Yet quite exhilarating all at once. Very well written. 


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