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Haiku of Love

November 15, 2012
By Hiroshi-Oniisan-Chugi PLATINUM, Portsmouth, Virginia
Hiroshi-Oniisan-Chugi PLATINUM, Portsmouth, Virginia
23 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We have nothing to fear, but Fear itself." -F.D.R.


As it comes to you
It shows plainly in your heart.
It’s undying love



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on Sep. 12 2014 at 11:18 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

I love it. I can connect to it, a lot. If it makes sense, I was there. It perfectly describes, the feeling I'm feeling for someone. Though it may be short, it simple yet complex; beautifully, wonderfully, and well-written. It has emotion, depth, power, and you. Thank you for sharing this!

on Nov. 20 2012 at 1:40 pm
City_Of_Angels PLATINUM, West Des Moines, Iowa
25 articles 1 photo 31 comments
cool. i love it.

.king. SILVER said...
on Nov. 20 2012 at 1:10 pm
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 569 comments

Favorite Quote:
( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

Excellent Haiku,