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Bye Bye

August 4, 2012
By Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
18 articles 5 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
Are you ready to go to battle with your mind?- Written by me :)
Lost the battle, win the war//Bringing my sinking ship back to the shore- Paramore, Now

Don't talk; don't say it.
Don't try to make me feel sad.
You're the perpetrate.

You still won't hear me.
I'm fed up with too much hurt.
Say you care. ALL LIES.

Let my heart wander,
but I won't be tormented.
My heart won't be yours.

Do you hear my cries?
I can't stand you anymore.
I'm saying goodbye.

The author's comments:
How some people try to put the blame on someone else and mistreat them.

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on Apr. 12 2013 at 8:24 pm
monkeymorgan BRONZE, Middlebury, Indiana
2 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fair means that everybody gets what they need and the only way to get what you need is to make that happen yourself." Rick Riordan

good but very sad and relatable. Its a perfect description of a teenagers broken heart.

KylieK GOLD said...
on Feb. 10 2013 at 1:57 pm
KylieK GOLD, Mt. Washington, Kentucky
11 articles 0 photos 270 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To love is to surpass one's self."

I liked it. I admire how you don't abuse capitalizing words, (with other poets on here, it just gets to seeming like they got too "caps lock happy" or they have anger issues). The way you construct them into your poetry is... Well played :)

EMarie GOLD said...
on Sep. 19 2012 at 9:35 pm
EMarie GOLD, Joplin, Missouri
19 articles 7 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Courage comes in all sizes, but fits only a few.
What is wise is not always right and what is right is not always wise.
Knowing what is wrong and right is not choosing which to fight.
-All of these are by me

It was good. Keep it up!!

on Aug. 6 2012 at 10:13 pm
Rainbeauxs SILVER, Bridgetown, Other
7 articles 3 photos 42 comments
I can't relate to this,but I know a lot of broken hearted teenagers can.I loved it =) .Good job I look foward to seeing more of your work!