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Ever Changing

August 2, 2011
By IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé


Life is a rainbow
But the colors are fading
And now black and white

Life is a voyage
But the tempest wrecked my ship
And now sinking down

Life is a shelter
But the tsunami hit it
It cannot be home

No, life is weather
It might have been raining hard
But it is changing...


The author's comments:
One day, you're up the next, you're down. But you can be up again because life is changing. :)

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cookiegirl said...
on Sep. 3 2011 at 5:19 am
This is creative and emotional:) And the words are powerful.

on Aug. 14 2011 at 12:30 am
JerseyGirl716 BRONZE, Central, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"We gain strength, and courage, and confidence by each experience in which we really stop to look fear in the face... we must do that which we think we cannot." -Eleanor Roosevelt

I couldn't agree more. Great job!

on Aug. 6 2011 at 2:01 pm
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
~Hope. Faith. Love~
~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~
~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than
a distant memory.~

I like the emotion and thought that was put into this.

I like how the stanza's have their own little topic. It was nice!


mokona BRONZE said...
on Aug. 5 2011 at 10:04 pm
mokona BRONZE, Yelm, Washington
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That was nice. I liked the effect of the last stanza. All the rest is about life going down, then bam it's up at last. It gives off a satisfying feeling.