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January 24, 2008
By Anonymous

One shimmering eye
stares at me through the window.
Don’t leave me, sweet moon.

© Anonymous

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munkyman95 GOLD said...
on Mar. 26 2010 at 12:07 pm
munkyman95 GOLD, Medway, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I will become, what I know I am' Michael Jordan

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This is very good... I love the idea
angel cortez said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 10:06 am
angel cortez, New Haven, Connecticut
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it was not easy 4 me to understand
onelesslonelygirl said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 9:23 am
onelesslonelygirl, Luck, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.

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This kept me thinking for awhile. I love it! It's very creative.
Mostly_Dead said...
on Jan. 27 2010 at 7:49 pm
Mostly_Dead, San Jose, California
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Favorite Quote:
"If you hadn't nailed it to the perch it would be pushing up the daisies. It's run down the curtain and joined the quiet invisible. This is an ex-parrot!" (Monty Python)

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I'm surprised this was brought as haiku.
life_of_a_leaf PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 5 2010 at 3:00 pm
life_of_a_leaf PLATINUM, Morris Plains, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"We're all just kids who grew up way too fast" - The Cab

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very creative haiku. i like how you used personification.
cheyenneduhon PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 27 2009 at 5:41 am
cheyenneduhon PLATINUM, Lumberton, Texas
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isnt an amazing thing when something so small could touch a heart so much?
MorningStar15 said...
on Mar. 14 2009 at 1:36 am
beautiful
summer_rain341 said...
on Feb. 1 2009 at 5:43 pm
that was beautiful. simple but beautiful!
Marcos said...
on Sep. 29 2008 at 1:38 pm
easy to understand with simply words
Amy said...
on Sep. 21 2008 at 7:34 pm
Amazing poem, very inspiring. I find it harder to write short poems than long ones. Good job! ^^
Rayne said...
on Sep. 17 2008 at 3:33 pm
Nice poem. simple, but nice. :) The moon inspires a lot of my poems aswell. Keep up the good POEMS!!!!
harry_potter_fangirl said...
on Sep. 17 2008 at 1:46 am
wow. simple yet inspiring. good job.