Maximillian | Teen Ink


July 14, 2010
By avantgarde GOLD, Stillwater, Minnesota
avantgarde GOLD, Stillwater, Minnesota
10 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
I write for the same reason I breathe...because if I didn't I would die. --Isaac Asimov

unreciprocated love;
forgetting is hard.

The author's comments:
Inspired by a boy I have a crush on.

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on Aug. 24 2010 at 7:55 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

This articulated the feeling so well. The best compliment I can give you is this: you are an artist of brevity.

KatB14 SILVER said...
on Aug. 18 2010 at 2:13 pm
KatB14 SILVER, Chesapeake, Virginia
8 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You don't always get the waterfall short-cut in Mario-Kart. That's life."-I.P.

"Doubt thou the stars are fire; Doubt that the sun doth move; Doubt truth to be a liar; But never doubt I love." -Hamlet

I agree with Sky, it sounds so much more than just a crush. But at the time it feels like the biggest thing in the world, and you totally captured that. Great haiku!

on Aug. 18 2010 at 12:38 pm
sky_is_womb BRONZE, Moorestown, New Jersey
2 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
All the soarings of my mind begin within my blood- Rilke

i liked how your choice of words made it sound very...advanced, professional. it makes it sound like so much more than just a "stupid teenage crush". very very beautifully written!

on Aug. 18 2010 at 11:51 am
amandap PLATINUM, Midlothian, Virginia
31 articles 0 photos 183 comments
short and sweet and to the point! well done!