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Stages of A Breakup

May 28, 2010
By NeverFallTooHard PLATINUM, Hartford, Wisconsin
NeverFallTooHard PLATINUM, Hartford, Wisconsin
24 articles 5 photos 98 comments

Favorite Quote:
Reason is powerless in the expression of Love.~ Rumi
Realisim, in painting, is what one wants to see, not what they really see. ~ Janet Fish

Black tears drip down my face,
tattooed blackness on my face,

from crying so hard.

My palms hit the walls,

my rage is out of controll,

hands bloody and bruised.

I can't belive how

recklessly and stupidly,

I could fall for you.

Depression sets in,
desperation takes its course

My shattered black heart.

Oh what fun we had,

my troubles were amended,

but now you caused more.

More fish in the sea
more for you AND more for me,

than we can count.

I don't 'need you now',
I will never 'run to you',

we can't be a song.

Did we have a song?
Like happy couples should have?

We were not happy.

I don't need to be
happy with you, now do I?

I am fine alone.

The author's comments:
This is for those who are (or have) gone through a breakup. Comment 'n' Rate!

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This article has 3 comments.

DevinQuin GOLD said...
on Dec. 11 2010 at 5:56 pm
DevinQuin GOLD, Norwalk, Iowa
12 articles 8 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If it would be revealed or demonstrated that there is no future state (heaven), my advice to every man, woman, and child would be, as our existence would be in our own power, to take opium." - John Adams

I can definately relate to this! I think it sums up almost every break up!

on Sep. 30 2010 at 7:17 pm
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

hmmm. you don't sound fine alone.....XD

on Jul. 29 2010 at 3:16 pm
BooBooBunny BRONZE, Burnesville, North Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A man's a success if he wakes up and goes to bed-and in between does what he wants to do."- Bob Dylan

I love how apparent youre passion is.