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Hiding Me

April 20, 2010
By sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
63 articles 28 photos 33 comments

You don't understand
I'm here but you don't see me
Don't know what I am



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on Jul. 11 2012 at 1:58 pm
phlogiston ELITE, Hermitage, Tennessee
224 articles 0 photos 117 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A day without laughter is a day wasted" -Charlie Chaplin

I feel like this all the time. Great work!

.king. SILVER said...
on Jul. 11 2012 at 4:44 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 573 comments

Favorite Quote:
( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

Little words, Lots of meaning!

.king. SILVER said...
on Jul. 11 2012 at 4:44 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 573 comments

Favorite Quote:
( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

Little words, Lots of meaning!

on Apr. 14 2012 at 3:23 pm
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
39 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
Theres so many that I can't pick sorry

One word: Awesomeness and beautiful

NNNEEEOOO11 said...
on Mar. 1 2012 at 8:12 pm
NNNEEEOOO11, New York, New York
0 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything has a meaning, if only we could read it" -Philip Pullman

This is very beautiful. Well done!

HeyHay said...
on Feb. 8 2012 at 11:19 pm
HeyHay, Mabank, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
I Love You.

ALOT of people can really relate to this. Sometimes, people just don't really care and assume something of a person when they don't really know them. Beautiful... :D

on Nov. 12 2011 at 6:07 pm
meadowood BRONZE, Sterling, Virginia
4 articles 3 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"For by grace you have been saved through faith." -Ephesians 2:8a

Love. Love. LOVE!

ellabella said...
on Oct. 21 2011 at 6:41 pm
ellabella, Dayton, Ohio
0 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life has no meaning anymore does it?"

Awesome! Speaks actions!

on Oct. 21 2011 at 9:15 am
poetrylyrics BRONZE, Helena, Arkansas
1 article 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
1)I will be grateful in all circumstances.
2)The measure of a life, after all, is not its duration, but its donation

I feel the same way. Sometimes people dont really see who we are , but what they want to see. Check out my first poem. : )

nicole.ryan said...
on Apr. 6 2011 at 11:54 am
I liked this poem because I like how you can feel the emotions throughout it even though it's short.

on Apr. 6 2011 at 11:53 am
I like this poem because I can relate to it and I know how she feels.

on Mar. 15 2011 at 9:12 am
Dominicano_Loco PLATINUM, Spotsylvania, Virginia
40 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live and learn, and when ya fall, Stand Strong and come back!"/"I'm goin to regrett this 1 tomorrow."

it's there's an air of mystery around this haiku. there can be several reasons why you wrote this. I look forward to reading more from you. :)

sam013 DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 25 2011 at 7:34 pm
sam013 DIAMOND, San Diego, California
63 articles 28 photos 33 comments
thanks! that means a lot :)

cammie300 said...
on Feb. 21 2011 at 6:07 pm
cammie300, Port Huron, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments
i like this peom it's mysterious it's short and sweet but keeps u on edge. I thinnk u might b one of my fav teenink authors Keep writting you've got talent!!

on Jan. 30 2011 at 9:42 pm
NewDarkness BRONZE, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
My mind is complex so I don't do simple tasks

I really like this is makes me think

on Oct. 6 2010 at 7:23 am
pnkninja11 BRONZE, Partlow, Virginia
2 articles 0 photos 27 comments
I like this poem. It leaves mystery behind it. I'm here but you don't see me Don't know what I am. It keeps you guessing.

on Sep. 9 2010 at 12:25 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
30 articles 0 photos 414 comments

Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

hmm...i really like this...the picture goes perfectly with it too(: 5 stars(;

on Sep. 1 2010 at 5:16 pm
classicStara PLATINUM, Potomac, Maryland
26 articles 0 photos 28 comments
i like this, its confusing in the secretive way, nice!

on Sep. 1 2010 at 9:40 am
TheOcherousRodentia PLATINUM, Toronto, Other
29 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is infinitely growing;
It's capacity of love and fear is impossible
To calculate by the means of math, or
The properties of science, and to conatain
Its ferious unpredictability is only a virtue
That humans despire

This really nice, and secretive :) I actually wrote a poem almost opposite of this one

on Jun. 2 2010 at 11:29 pm
Cheesecake SILVER, Cripple Creek, Colorado
6 articles 5 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If music be the food of love play on"-William Shakespeare

that's really good! i wrote one kind of like it (its pending)