Rainbow Wings

November 6, 2009

By GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon

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Gracefully dancing
Fluttering in the blue skies
Rainbows in its wings

In search of a leaf
To perch on ‘till morning light
The Butterfly sleeps

The author's comments:

When playing with my neighbors, I saw a beautiful butterfly flying around in the sky. It inspired me to write this Haiku. I hope you guys enjoy it.

This article has 7 comments.

GOLD said...

on Jan. 21 2010 at 6:45 pm

okay. by the way yours are great.

GOLD said...

on Jan. 21 2010 at 6:05 pm

okay i will look at them right now :)

GOLD said...

on Jan. 21 2010 at 12:52 pm

Okay they just posted some new ones that I wrote. I had promised to tell you when they came out. :)

Tinkerbell

GOLD said...

on Jan. 3 2010 at 7:38 pm

Thanks sooo much!!!!!! Butterflys are sooo pretty!!!! :)

GOLD said...

on Dec. 29 2009 at 10:23 am

I think this poem is short and sweet !! Wonderful !!

GOLD said...

on Dec. 17 2009 at 5:51 pm

ya i thought it neede more detail top :) its really hard in a haiku but i will continue writing with improvement. thanx soo much 4 the comment ;)

GOLD said...

on Dec. 17 2009 at 9:58 am

Great job. um, i think it needed a little more detail but other than that it was great.

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