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Train MAG

October 30, 2009
By Anonymous

Does thinking about
if you think about me, count
as thinking of you?

© Anonymous

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theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 27 2014 at 1:41 pm
theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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I will forever love this poem. This is beautiful and amazing. I love this. This is one of the best haiku's i've ever read on here. :)
LunarBirth GOLD said...
on Oct. 20 2013 at 10:12 am
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I like it but what does the title symbolize??
Kestrel PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 7 2012 at 3:22 pm
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Okay i just went back and reread it again because i was going to through all my favorites, and again i ask, you, Sir or Madam Anonymous: why is it called Train??? 
Kestrel PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 19 2012 at 6:02 pm
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I think I had to read this four times before my brain truly appreciated it. I like it, though I don't understand the significance of calling it Train?
Jawsman21 said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:41 pm
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great haiku, it really makes you think
Bennytheman8 SILVER said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:39 pm
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maybe your just stupid. just kidding! I agree
Bennytheman8 SILVER said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:37 pm
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This is so good! I think it could flow a little better though.
bradysmith said...
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very confusing but makes you think good job
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This messes with my mind, very good!
bmoney22 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:33 pm
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confusing but makes you think I LIKE IT!!!!!
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Though it is kinda repetitive, I enjoyed this!!!
silence-is-loud GOLD said...
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aww so short sweet and clever!!! I ponder this all the time
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on Jan. 18 2011 at 8:15 pm
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I love it! :)
Rowan O&#39Shea BRONZE said...
on Jan. 4 2011 at 3:37 pm
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so so so good! :)
Alia_S._Tan BRONZE said...
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Lots of meaning in this haiku! I luv it since i know how tht feels. Keep it up!
lollypops GOLD said...
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nice short ans simple
justsmileanddance PLATINUM said...
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yes it does! i love this! it got me confused at first but now i get it and i like it! 
BrittieVee SILVER said...
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short and simple, but so much meaning :) i love it
KAT.CH GOLD said...
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simple wordings but presents a beautiful picture in a mind
mjhubbert BRONZE said...
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This is really spectacular!  I didn't know such an idea could fit into 17 syllables.