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Winds of Change

October 17, 2009
By Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
14 articles 0 photos 279 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If it comes out of the lion's mouth...it will be on the test."
-Mr. Bala


Crisp red, golden brown
The leaves slowly start to fall
Autum is coming

Put on a sweatshirt!
Cold, brisk September weather
Is fast approaching

Red leaves in my hair
I flung myself in the pile
And started to laugh

Children aren't happy
School is once more in session
Teachers, back to work

Falling in the wind
The leaves crunch beneath my feet
I enjoy the sound


The author's comments:
This is my first haiku.

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pickle*eater said...
on Dec. 6 2010 at 11:30 am

i dissagrae i lovveddd it!!!!!!!!

:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

                        :P


on May. 16 2010 at 4:02 pm
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3

That reply was not supposed to be a reply.... :)

on May. 16 2010 at 4:02 pm
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3

I LUV YOUR POETRY!!!!!!!!

on Apr. 1 2010 at 5:51 pm
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 227 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

Yeah, I agree with M.A.C. Maybe it's because most of it sounds happy and then you get to the part about school...Great imagery, though.

on Jan. 11 2010 at 12:44 pm
Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
14 articles 0 photos 279 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If it comes out of the lion's mouth...it will be on the test."
-Mr. Bala

Thank you very much! :) I love constructive critisism. :)

on Dec. 14 2009 at 7:20 pm
nature-elf PLATINUM, Ramsey, New Jersey
42 articles 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If love is shelter, I'll walk in the rain." -Anonymous

good for your first haiku, only it doesn't match right. still, good job.


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