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My Rockstar

September 28, 2009
By Kristi Desatnick GOLD, Lawrenceville, New Jersey
Kristi Desatnick GOLD, Lawrenceville, New Jersey
10 articles 1 photo 2 comments

Brown, chocolatey eyes,
Voice to take your breath away,
That boy's my rockstar.

Or he used to be,
I guess I was just dreaming,
And now he's just gone.

I took things too fast,
Told him what was in my heart,
And scared him away.



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on Dec. 23 2010 at 6:00 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

aww...

 

That was really good though, Great Job!!! :) Keep it smiling


Miamicutie13 said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 5:40 pm
Wow that so deep! I think you will write great things in the future

KaitE BRONZE said...
on Nov. 9 2009 at 6:43 am
KaitE BRONZE, Safety Harbor, Florida
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Nice work keep it up.

on Oct. 14 2009 at 4:48 pm
Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"If it comes out of the lion's mouth...it will be on the test."
-Mr. Bala

Very nice. It's a very unique haiku, since haikus usually deal with nature. I liked it a lot.

IRBFGW DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 8 2009 at 9:47 am
IRBFGW DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
53 articles 1 photo 223 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hey, assbutt!" Supernatural, Castiel.

Not bad, accually really good. Very creative and deep. 5 Stars!