clowns | Teen Ink


September 24, 2009
By Jossplosion BRONZE, York, Pennsylvania
Jossplosion BRONZE, York, Pennsylvania
4 articles 2 photos 0 comments

clowns will not eat you
they will not eat you
just rip out your tongue
and hang you by your hair

The author's comments:
I like to write really short random things

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on Sep. 26 2012 at 8:59 pm
XxInsaneSmileyxX BRONZE, Arlington, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"They say that time heals all wounds, but that presumes the source of grief is finite." -MB, Mortal Instruments series

0___________________________o Well... .....That just increased my clownophobia by tenfold....

on Jan. 28 2012 at 1:57 pm
Dolly9471 BRONZE, Berkeley Heights, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
In the end will will not remember the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.
Martin Luther King Jr.

Strange and intreguing poem. Funny yet scary all the same!

juggalohomie said...
on Jan. 6 2012 at 1:18 pm
juggalohomie, Ocala, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
i like faygo!!!!

it not even haiku

JuJu said...
on Dec. 6 2010 at 3:24 pm
This poem was creepy, but i like it. I like this poem because the tone and mood. The tone is creepy, because in lines 4 and 5 it says," Just rip out your tongue/ and hang you by your hair." The mood is scary, because it says," Just rip out your tongue".(4) The only suggestion I have is not repeating they will not eat you.

on Sep. 9 2010 at 1:21 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

haha thats scary but it made me laugh(:

Eric DeMeo said...
on Apr. 30 2010 at 9:30 am
Eric DeMeo, Saugus, Massachusetts
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scary but good

RadLeY said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:00 am
RadLeY, Saugus, Massachusetts
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Good job and scared me and made me laugh at the same time!

on Mar. 17 2010 at 10:54 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.


This is freaky, funny, fresh, and just plain good! I loved it, it made me smile, because I like to say stuff like that! Mind commenting on some of my work? Thx1


on Feb. 23 2010 at 1:50 pm
jesusluvsus BRONZE, Benton, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
The Bible

that is kind of freaky love it

on Nov. 5 2009 at 3:17 pm
SonOfApollo GOLD, Katy, Texas
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halls SILVER said...
on Oct. 15 2009 at 7:41 pm
halls SILVER, Harrison City, Pennsylvania
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This poem is quite unique, interesting, and different. I like how you use that picture with all the teeth all over and how you say clowns will not eat you. The ending is scary and violent. This would absolutely make children scared of clowns.

ken5567734 said...
on Oct. 5 2009 at 10:24 am
that clown needs to get an makeover