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September 4, 2009
By lovebegins PLATINUM, Las Vegas, Nevada
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the wind twirls
and whirls behine me
i keep on walking
i fall to the ground with a crash
and a big bash
i stand up and find out
im at the end

© Michelle B., Durham, NC

The author's comments:
i wrote this one day about the way the wind whirls around us but we do nothing. how it can change our lives in a second and the way we can never find the end.
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weaselkiesel BRONZE said...
on Jan. 25 2011 at 12:23 pm
weaselkiesel BRONZE, Rochester, New York
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"My theory is if you look confident, you can pull off anything"- Jessica Alba

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this is not the proper format for a haiku! its a nice poem, but it is not a haiku
thepaperinventory PLATINUM said...
on May. 30 2010 at 2:24 pm
thepaperinventory PLATINUM, Saratoga, California
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Wow...this is awesome....

You are very very creative.

Thrush BRONZE said...
on Feb. 7 2010 at 10:20 am
Thrush BRONZE, Tegaad, Other
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This is really great. It's about how some people you end up wasting your life away. Very great.
jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Oct. 4 2009 at 4:34 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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this is great! so much emotion, and i like how it flowed together :) it's very creative and very good! nice job :) check out some of my work if you could, i would LOVE your feedback!