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The Best of Days

September 3, 2009
By Sango_Navia BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
Sango_Navia BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
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Young men shooting beasts
Small women raising children
Teepees on a plain

Bonnets flowing free
Winds smell of sickly honey
Hushed bees flying free

Dark clouds rolling by
Soft rumble heard from afar
Spring rains come again

Children sitting up
Gather little pets and toys
Smiling all the way home

The author's comments:
I wrote this peom for theature arts and it had to be about the Texas, so this is what came to me.

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This article has 4 comments.

on Jun. 12 2011 at 2:47 am
Grace4297 BRONZE, McLean, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Heads I win, tails you lose."

I really like this poem, it gave me a perfect picture and reminded me of when I lived in Texas. Good work!

lmd_4994 GOLD said...
on May. 21 2011 at 7:34 pm
lmd_4994 GOLD, Union Grove, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"May you live every day of your life" - Jonathan Swift

I see the beauty

Of haikus so clearly now

They flow like a song! :)

Ballerboy said...
on May. 6 2010 at 1:28 pm
I really like this poem, it is well written. KOOL!!!

on Jan. 31 2010 at 5:41 pm
Alyssa(: PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"I believe that everything happens for a reason. People change so that you can learn to let go, things go wrong so that you appreciate them when their right, you believe lies so you eventually learn to trust noone but yourself, and sometimes good things fall apart so better things can fall together."
— Marilyn Monroe

I LOVE THIS! :) Never stop writing!