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A Horse's Run

September 8, 2009
By thundergirl BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
thundergirl BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't judge a thunderstorm by how it looks. Judge it by the way it is.

As I run, feel strong
Wind amongst my long sleek mane
I'm walking on air

I feel like I'm flying
High up in our sky. It's
Like lying on a cloud

Now it's time to stop
My family is waiting for my return
I shall run to my home

The author's comments:
a passion for animals expecially horses is what inspired me to do this poem

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This article has 8 comments.

Amberocks:) said...
on Oct. 11 2011 at 4:53 pm
its true its not but its still good. even if its not 5 7 5

on Feb. 21 2011 at 10:35 am
sarahconway GOLD, Hillsboro, Kentucky
15 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everybody lies-Gregory House

I like this, I really do, but it isn't a haiku.  Just thought I would let you know.

on Nov. 15 2010 at 10:38 am
DragonMaster66.6 BRONZE, Washougal, Washington
1 article 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Crush your enemies, see them driven before you, and hear the lamentations of their women" -Conan the Barbarian-

neither, it's a poem

on Jan. 31 2010 at 5:47 pm
Alyssa(: PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
20 articles 2 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I believe that everything happens for a reason. People change so that you can learn to let go, things go wrong so that you appreciate them when their right, you believe lies so you eventually learn to trust noone but yourself, and sometimes good things fall apart so better things can fall together."
— Marilyn Monroe

Love it! Good secret description. I like it:)!

Katrap BRONZE said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 5:03 pm
Katrap BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you're gonna get." Forest Gump

Nice. I can picture the horse running. Is it wild, or tame?

Elena Lee R. said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 2:21 pm
I loved this poem. Is it about horses? i also liked the pciure that goes with it. Is it about a horse?

halls said...
on Sep. 22 2009 at 7:25 pm
I love how the way the horse is discribed running

blank said...
on Sep. 17 2009 at 9:04 pm
i love this story it is the best