Knees | Teen Ink


December 12, 2021
By Mela_P SILVER, Addison, Illinois
Mela_P SILVER, Addison, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
“Maybe the truth was, it shouldn't be so easy to be amazing. Then everything would be. It's the things you fight for and struggle with before earning that have the greatest worth. When something's difficult to come by, you'll do that much more to make sure it's even harder--if not impossible--to lose.” ― Sarah Dessen, Along for the Ride

I'm down on my knees.

Begging you to let me free. 

You ignore my pleas. 

The author's comments:

First Haiku. I'll take any feedback... :)

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on Dec. 16 2021 at 12:07 pm
smaddie24 PLATINUM, Cityland, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
“Light shines brightest in the deepest dark!”
-Jim Butcher

Here's some feedback: This is great! Not only did you write a haiku that makes sense, but you also made every line rhyme. That's awesome! Well done.