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3 Simple Haiku

May 6, 2021
By Anonymous

Rainbows 
 
Super colorful 
Arching through the bright blue sky 
Carries happiness 
 
 
Rain 
 
Tiny wet droplets 
Provide life for everything 
All come down at once 
 
 
Moonlight 
 
Provides enough light 
To help you see where you are 
Though beautiful


The author's comments:

I made these while working on another project for school and i wanted to write down my thoughts. These are the words that i were able to fit into a haiku about nature and what i think of it.


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on May. 7 2021 at 6:11 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)

"Upon his bench the pieces lay
As if an artwork on display
Of gears and hands
And wire-thin bands
That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

2 thoughts: try to reword super in the rainbow one, 1 becauserainbows are generally faint and 2 because super sounds somewhat childish and poems are more sophisticated. and the moonlight one isn't as strong as the others. aside from that, great job!