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For my Sake

September 12, 2018
By Summer_R_Quinn DIAMOND, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
Summer_R_Quinn DIAMOND, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
64 articles 57 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you chase two rabbits, you will lose them both.
- Native American proverb

Do not go gentle into that good night but rage, rage against the dying of the light.
- Dylan Thomas

What is past is past -- it is the present and the future that concern us.
- Hiawatha, founder of the Iroquois Confederacy


I give and you take;

Can’t you change that for my sake?

You make this too hard.



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on Apr. 30 at 2:18 pm
saunderschristopher592, Charlack, Missouri
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cool

on Feb. 27 at 12:48 pm
Summer_R_Quinn DIAMOND, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
64 articles 57 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you chase two rabbits, you will lose them both.
- Native American proverb

Do not go gentle into that good night but rage, rage against the dying of the light.
- Dylan Thomas

What is past is past -- it is the present and the future that concern us.
- Hiawatha, founder of the Iroquois Confederacy

@jhalsey55 Thank you!

jhalsey55 GOLD said...
on Feb. 26 at 2:33 pm
jhalsey55 GOLD, Eldora, Iowa
11 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You're Killing me Smalls"

Great job

on Jan. 29 at 8:36 pm
Summer_R_Quinn DIAMOND, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
64 articles 57 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you chase two rabbits, you will lose them both.
- Native American proverb

Do not go gentle into that good night but rage, rage against the dying of the light.
- Dylan Thomas

What is past is past -- it is the present and the future that concern us.
- Hiawatha, founder of the Iroquois Confederacy

@fireflyar Thank you!

on Jan. 28 at 3:24 pm
fireflyar BRONZE, Truo, Other
1 article 0 photos 1 comment
great Hakiu good job!

on Oct. 31 2018 at 8:02 am
Summer_R_Quinn DIAMOND, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
64 articles 57 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you chase two rabbits, you will lose them both.
- Native American proverb

Do not go gentle into that good night but rage, rage against the dying of the light.
- Dylan Thomas

What is past is past -- it is the present and the future that concern us.
- Hiawatha, founder of the Iroquois Confederacy

@cmobb5618 There's no rule that says haikus can't rhyme, it adds a nice touch.

on Oct. 30 2018 at 5:07 pm
mythologynerd SILVER, Meridian, Idaho
9 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Better to let people think you a fool, then to open your mouth and prove it"








-Abraham Linclon

Other than that, I think this is really good haiku.

on Oct. 30 2018 at 5:05 pm
mythologynerd SILVER, Meridian, Idaho
9 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Better to let people think you a fool, then to open your mouth and prove it"








-Abraham Linclon

Hate to be a critic, but haikus don't rhyme

on Sep. 30 2018 at 5:27 pm
Summer_R_Quinn DIAMOND, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
64 articles 57 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you chase two rabbits, you will lose them both.
- Native American proverb

Do not go gentle into that good night but rage, rage against the dying of the light.
- Dylan Thomas

What is past is past -- it is the present and the future that concern us.
- Hiawatha, founder of the Iroquois Confederacy

@rinsophi Thank you so much, I really appreciate that!

on Sep. 29 2018 at 4:16 pm
rinsophi BRONZE, Berlin, Maryland
2 articles 1 photo 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"I didn't get good by sitting there. I actually got up and did something."

A haiku is so simple, and I've only looked at the ones teacher's have gave me. But you did such a good job putting so much emotion into a haiku!


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