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I have no idea where I was when I wrote this

May 23, 2018
By MilesVibes BRONZE, Williamsville, New York
MilesVibes BRONZE, Williamsville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
For hate is never conquered by hate. Hate is conquered by love.<br /> <br /> - a fortune cookie


Worrisome ill
it turns to the till
to the till
to the till
Furrysome feast
drowned the beast
drowned the beast

We take turns
The world turns
The fire destroys more than just my ferns

Accomplished the task
Incredible at last!
At last!

or at least they’re still here

Thank you for understanding

Thank you for time passing

Thank you for time lasting

Magma burns away
To perceive the way

New New New

Thank you

New movement
Different than the last

My heart beats
Deep down i know that
Believing that

It will continue on forever

But that's the opposite of my fear

Thankfully it yet not dare
to carry through
But one day maybe
Someday maybe
Sunday maybe

Thoughts should keep to themselves
With no will to help
Cry for help
No more of them

Different perspective
I digress
Which one wins
why and how

End with a question?


The author's comments:

I, in fact, did know where I was when I wrote this. I was at my friends house at around 2am and I suddenly said "I need to write" so my friend goes and grabs all the writing materials he could find (six findex cards and an assortment of writing utencils) and then I just wrote away. There isn't a whole lot of though put into each line rather it was the overall feeling of the poem that I put though into. the title of the poem refers to my head space while I was writing it -- I was in a very lucid mindset when I wrote it.


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