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Terrifying stare

September 25, 2017
By Writer28465 BRONZE, Clarkston, Michigan
Writer28465 BRONZE, Clarkston, Michigan
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Terrifying Stare
  Waiting in the car
My friend and I turned our heads
What we saw was
Worse than seeing a clown on Halloween night
A  tall Woman with dark hair
Stood at the gas pump
Giving us an  ice stare.

Eye to eye, face to face
Mysterious, strange and weird feelings
Fill our entire body head to toe
Millions of thoughts race through our  head
I thought, Who is this woman? Why is she looking at us?
My heart beat started to quicken
Nervous laughter turned to chills up our spine
The woman’s ghost like pale face
Was staring into our eyes

Afraid and alone
We see a figure coming from the store
In that moment I realized it was my friends mom
That is when we knew
  This odd experience would come to an end
  I feel a sense of relief deep down inside
  The terror of the stare was bone chilling

We tell her mom all about what had happened
But we just brushed it off as if it were nothing
But,Even though we didn’t think anything of it
It doesn’t make this experience
Any less terrifying  than it already was


The author's comments:

This poem was inspired by a time my friend and I were in the car at the gas station and we saw a creepy woman staring at us. I want people to imagine they are there when reading the poem to really undrstand it more.


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