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Egotism

April 17, 2017
By Paigebullard BRONZE, League City, Texas
Paigebullard BRONZE, League City, Texas
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her eyes became duller as the days passed

her voice lost its passion to be heard

her mind was destroying itself with its own thoughts

her heart wilted in the absence of him

she lost everything that night

everything she desired

everything that made her want to keep going

his eyes gleamed with confidence

his benevolence muted as the sharpness of his tongue became deafening

his mind thrived in the toxicity of its cruel and arrogant thoughts

he lost everything that night

everything that made him boastful

everything that powered his egotistical insanity

they both lost something

but while one had interpreted being taken advantage of

as love

the other had exploited the insecurities of a passionate soul

for drive

in becoming more engulfed by his own existence


The author's comments:

I was insired to write this piece because I believe that ego has the power to destroy even the most innocent and beautiful things in life.


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Rgeiler said...
on Apr. 27 2017 at 1:41 pm
WOWWW! Paige, I'm blown away! Continue to grow where you are planted babe. This is a beautiful piece! Continue writing, can't wait to see more from you!

Amylynn said...
on Apr. 27 2017 at 11:56 am
Wow Paige, this piece is amazing!!!!!!! Very talented.

David hull said...
on Apr. 23 2017 at 7:45 pm
Wow, a truly amazing piece. This spoke to me on an emotional level. It brought me back to a downhill part in my life. Please continue to write more.