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Help i need help
March 22, 2017
help i need help
im poor
and i cant yelp
help im struggling alot
i like money and i often sot
help it isnt cool
othen then swimming my words in the pool.
help it isnt fair
help if you dare
HELP!
© Lauren M., Avondale, AZ
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makeupartist16 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 14 2017 at 3:22 pm
A few mechanical errors: 1. It is spelled 'sought' 2. A lot is two words. Other: 1. add something after 'i often sought'- What were you looking for? 2. change it to 'my are swimming in the pool' and add a line after it either elaborating on what the pool is or why this is a struggle. 3. It ends sort of abruptly, but it is your prerogative whether wish to add more to the ending.
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