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March 16, 2017
yelling, sounds like help
scream
scream ends
yelling sounds like I got you
yelling sounds like let go, let go
yelling sounds like hands, let me see
yelling sounds like no, help, let go, help
nothing for a second
scream
scream ends
yelling sounds like assistance
yelling is indiscernible
yelling sounds like stay down please stay down please help
yelling sounds like let go
scream
scream ends
yelling sounds like gun
yelling is indiscernible
gunshot
yelling sounds like oh my god oh god help
yelling sounds like I got you
yelling sounds like oh god
yelling sounds like stay still
yelling is indiscernible
scream
scream ends
© Haley M., Ellinwood, KS
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This article has 14 comments.
Gabbs said...
on Mar. 23 2017 at 8:36 pm
Great work! You have so much talent!
Idpina said...
on Mar. 23 2017 at 3:22 am
Great read
C-Los said...
on Mar. 23 2017 at 2:48 am
Very powerful message and the repetition is amazing
Cole N said...
on Mar. 22 2017 at 8:33 pm
Sweet stuff
Eatnyuh said...
on Mar. 22 2017 at 6:52 pm
Extremely Powerful and the repetition makes this poem really stand out!
Jariiiiiiii said...
on Mar. 22 2017 at 5:09 pm
AMAZING!!!!!!
Alice said...
on Mar. 22 2017 at 4:59 pm
Efficient and powerful use of repition and a great poem in general!
Valentina said...
on Mar. 22 2017 at 3:41 pm
Very original style to convey a powerful story!
Savannah.W PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 22 2017 at 1:51 pm
Nicely written
jstarobin said...
on Mar. 22 2017 at 1:31 pm
Interesting idea and really nicely done!!!
Neah_Cardine said...
on Mar. 22 2017 at 11:01 am
I like it. You've got such a good talent I hope to see more of it! Try writing something for the anvil one day!
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