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March 6, 2017
By addictwithapen PLATINUM, Norfolk, Virginia
addictwithapen PLATINUM, Norfolk, Virginia
21 articles 14 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm at it again as an addict with a pen." - twenty one pilots, addict with a pen


so much depends
upon

a webpage, checked

daily,

showing nothing new,
until:

“posted 5 minutes
ago”


The author's comments:

Based on William Carlos Williams's "The Red Wheelbarrow".


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on Apr. 9 2017 at 8:15 pm
addictwithapen PLATINUM, Norfolk, Virginia
21 articles 14 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm at it again as an addict with a pen." - twenty one pilots, addict with a pen

Thank you :)

hwoodruff98 said...
on Apr. 9 2017 at 2:09 pm
hwoodruff98, Lititz, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"In a gentle way, you can shake the world." -Mahatma Gandhi

"What will your verse be?" -Dead Poets Society

"Write drunk, edit sober." -Ernest Hemingway

I really like this one. I think you imitated WCW's simplistic style well. It's also humorous with today's social media culture.