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mind of my body

January 2, 2017
By Black_Pool BRONZE, Al Sharjah, Other
Black_Pool BRONZE, Al Sharjah, Other
3 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything is beautiful but beautiful isn't everything.

I tried talking to you

But my words didn't charm you.

My misery didn't leave me

 Because you only harmed me.


You: the mind of my body

And my reckless and restless soul;

Who blackened my heart

'Cause it was your evil-hearted goal.


My sentences broke down

All because of you.

Talking turned to murmuring

Because my words were a few


Curses and phrases,

From a strange foreign land;

Which was you: the mind of body,

Ruining me was your evil plan!


My head spun in circles;

Thinking what to do,

How to relieve myself of the misery

Of being with you.


Was there any solution;

Of how to detach myself

From the ugliness of your mind

And your heart,

But my soul.

The author's comments:

Through this poem, I just wanted to say that nobody should let anyone or anything control you.

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This article has 2 comments.

HammadWaseem said...
on Jan. 8 2017 at 2:30 pm
HammadWaseem, Lahore, Other
0 articles 5 photos 283 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be proud of who you are.

You can't see me
-John Cena

Ooh, somebody stop me!

awesome! @Black_Pool Will you check and comment on my two pics named, "Cute Boy", "Smart Guy" and one video named,"The Unbeatable Breakdancer"? :)

on Jan. 8 2017 at 2:02 pm
Travelergirl DIAMOND, Central, Utah
64 articles 5 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do not judge my story by the chapter you walked in on"- Unknown

Great poem, you are an amazing writer!