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Don't Eat the CANDY!

December 12, 2016
By its.xayve BRONZE, Las Vegas NV, Nevada
its.xayve BRONZE, Las Vegas NV, Nevada
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Don’t Eat the CANDY!
STOP!
Mom cheered as I reached for the gluttonous
Candy bag. Its funny to think of me going bonkers for
Something so mouthwatering and appetizing.


5 years old was when i started eating candy like nuts.
I remember having to go to the dentist every week.


7 years old i went insane I had that atrocious laugh
My eyes look as if i have been crazed. I could
Not see candy at all. Mom considered me taking me to the hospital
Where they would help me.


9 years old 2 years after being in the hospital. So many
Things happened there so many. I would not be able to look
At candy or even touch it. That hospital was ghoulish. Yet,
It changed me into a more ¨Mature¨ person.


11 years old i can have candy, but not a lot. Just
3 pieces. I went to the dentist I only had 1 cavity
Might as well keep it that way.


13 years old i meet some friends i have known them for 2 years, so they pretty much know
About my problem. Iv´e kind of told them do not give me
Candy. Yet, when they gave me candy  jumped
Out of my set started howling random things.
next , thing you know i was attacked.


15 dulce yep its gone yes! No more going
Crazy. Not having to go to counseling lessons
Anymore I can finally control myself. WAIT! I think i see a cupcake
let me go take on bit. Yes! I didn't go
Idiotic i'm free finally.


Hold up that feeling is coming back the one where i get a tingle in my hands
And start To tremble. I shouldn't have eaten the full cupcake.
Maybe my love for candy isn't gone maybe its unfavorable!


16...The End...For Now


The author's comments:

i alwyas loved candy so i decided to write a poeam about it, it is fun and comedy like i hope i get published 


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