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Early Death

December 13, 2016
By EvaAlpine BRONZE, Oswego, Illinois
EvaAlpine BRONZE, Oswego, Illinois
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She didn’t want to be alone.


Instead you declined,
Letting her go.


Alone she went,
A bit too trusting.
She drank away,
Making the mistake.
She tumbled in,
Awoken in a bed.


Here I lay,
In this bed.
With you creeping into the room with shame,
Like a child who broke it’s mother's vase
Making your best effort to stay quiet.


You snake your way into the blankets,
Hiding yourself underneath the layers.
I rest my hand on your shaking shoulder.


Your voice cracked as you spoke.
You were a dove.
A dove that’s body coaligned with a window,
Only to be brought to the ground,
Stopped.


Now you lay, flat.
With the blood seeping through your knuckles.
For the rage externalized,
And here I lay, left.
Left with an anchor which has finally sunk.


The author's comments:

Zoey is a girl who wanted Brianna to go to a party with her. Brianna couldn’t go, so Zoey ended up going alone. Zoey drank too much and then a guy took advantage of her. Zoey was disgusted with herself and got extremely depressed and then killed herself. I symbolized Brianna as the dove because she’s innocent. When she found out Zoey died it hit her like in the poem, the dove hitting the window. Now as she had her anxiety attack in my room, symbolized the dove hitting the ground and when she told me all this it kinda made my chest sink and it was hard to comfort her. It made me feel sad that she felt it was her fault, when she was innocent. I also did the number of lines in according to symbolistic numbers.


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